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this is just another installment to my story I am doing. It is only very short this time
Xullrae the pint size little drow belong to my friend Lissa Lassiter.
Hazalin belongs to me.
I hope you enjoy. any advice is greatly appreciated.
Short and sweet! Well done!
Certainly interesting, albeit a little short. You perked my interest, smooth artwork, smooth audio, great voice acting and i gotta laugh at the fella who cant make it across the log fast enough. Frames were a bit jittery though, felt like i'm watching a stop motion video a little, but good work.
I'm adding you to favourites so i can watch your work and keep updated. :)
thanx buddy I appreciate your encouraging comment. Oh yeah I tend to make my animations heavy. but I know were I am going wrong so hopefuly in the future I will be able to fix the problem or atleast make it less frequent. 'hugs' to you :)
Your drawing skill is rather unusual I might say, guess it's not everyone's taste, but then again, what is anyway ? ;) I personally like it!
Kudos for the voice-acting (top-notch) and the sound (I understand KaDoYuu's point, but I didn't mind the loud waterfall, waterfalls ARE loud indeed, even if it may be a bit distracting in this scene).
It's a rather short movie, like you mentioned, I'm very curious to see the story and character development in the next episodes, really eager to see how it will continue!
All in all, this deserves more then roughly 500 views imo.
ahh gee thanks buddy for your kind words. I hope to make them abit longer in future. yeah my art style is still progressing. I just hope to improve over time. Still I am so glad you had a look.
I enjoyed the visuals, yet again, and the voice acting is good. I would advise lowering the volume on some parts, however. Waterfalls ARE loud, granted, but the volume spike distracted from the dialogue, a bit.. All-in-all, this would make good demo reel material. This gets a solid 3.
thanx buddy I hope to improve with each one I do. Oh and thanx for pointing out the loud waterfall it was something I truly overlooked. cheers
hey this is some nice looking stuff, althought very short. the waterfall noise was a bit much at first, but the dialogue was good.
thanx buddy. I will definitely make sure I keep the sound effects in check from now on. I appreciate your input and advice :D
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