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It took me below 20 minutes. This was a try to see what can I animate in a short time.
you were exploring some interesting avenues in your dialogue...putting some more detail in your characters may have helped make this more entertaining
Ok, thanks. I shall do so.
This was quite interesting in storywise. Hate is a tiny bit of a loner in a sense and a self loathing, egotistical, person hating, whiny monster. The story again is a tiny bit high with the other following notices. Art style was very bland, dry and expressive. Audio is so-so since there minor soundtracks to accompany the tale. But overall it was the story that got to me since its a bit reflective on actual individuals on here. In fact you brought me a disturbing memory of a Newgrounder who became or turned rouged and attack his own school. His name was Jeff Weise of the Red Lake High School Massacre. Its a tragedy and a tale of sorrow for many and all sides that underwent this tragedy. But I digress, You've done a decent good job. I'm going to bestow you a 1 in a half out of 5. And a 2/5 in voting power. Keep practicing, creating and contributing on here friend. I hope you've enjoyed this review. Good day.
I did enjoyed it.\ I will make better animations in the future. Thanks!
Don't do that, spend more time on your animations. Most people spend MONTHS on their flash submissions, not 20 minutes. And you need a bit more content then that. Not just this badly drawn pink thing.
Umm, rated E?
uummm dafaq is this, its not sad and has no emotional appeal. Is this about u, are u a pink potatoe, if u are go boil u and ur computer and make some mashed potatoes
Great comment! I loved it!
Possibly long-lost relatives of Shotgun Man, these trenchcoat-clad teams have much better things to do than shoot their classmates.
Marc M. has some of the most tasteless and brilliant cartoons I have ever seen.
Crazy antics from under the sea!
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