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Sep 15, 2012 | 6:32 PM EDT

Author Comments

1st assignment: animation of a leaf or feather floating through the air.

Reviews


NewgroundSageNewgroundSage

Rated 2.5 / 5 stars September 16, 2012

Well done! Its nice decent form of animation you have there. You should be proud on your successful achievement on creating such a unique visual piece to exhibit and show and share to others on how animation is done. I'm going to bestow you a 3 in a half out of 5. And a 3/5 in voting power. I hope you keep practicing, creating and contributing here. I hope you've enjoyed this review and congratulations again on you hardwork here friend! Good day.


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Hyperbolime responds:

Thank you kind sir. :)


MistyEntertainmentMistyEntertainment

Rated 4 / 5 stars September 16, 2012

Woah, nice!

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The Good

* Nice use of the line tool. This is one of those few instances where the line tool doesn't look digital and mechanic, you used it to your advantage. So good for you!
* Nice clouds.
* The animation of the falling leaf. It was very well done. Really nice fbf on your part.

What Needs Improvement

* I know the focus is supposed to be on the leaf but I can't stop but look at the choppy tree!

Overall

* Overall, nice job! :)


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Hyperbolime responds:

Thank you very much! I agree the tree is choppy, I definitely could have put more effort into that.


mossberg500mossberg500

Rated 5 / 5 stars September 15, 2012

so awsome


Hyperbolime responds:

You are so awesome. :U