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Sep 9, 2012 | 10:21 AM EDT
  • Daily 4th Place September 10, 2012

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Sq. E stands for Squishable Episode by the way. There is finally an episode in the series which shows us the first day! Yeah, the animation at sometimes may not be great, but at least I think it is decent enough. However, as soon as I get my final hallway, classroom and etc., then the serie's backgrounds will look better! It would've been up earlier if it wasn't for this stupid error I had made after Opex says "I told you!". I hope you like it, and if you do, follow me please, and stay tuned for more Episodes that'll be shorter like regular web episodes.

EDIT: Daily 4th! My first main award! :)

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HaggardHaggard

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

The graphics are all right and you created some easy to distinguish caracters. Only thing that is difficult are their names. It's hard to name the characters if you cannot remember the names, haha.

Anyway, the length of the episode is okay. 5 Minutes aren't too long, but not too short either.

However, the flash would vastly improve if you had real voice actors. This computer generated voice has a very unusual way of pronouncing and accentuating things, which makes it hard to follow it at times.

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NekoMikaNekoMika

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

Very entertaining and a good five minutes long. Looking forward to what other shenanigans will be happening here. Also as for you, you say you are lazy but this flash seems to say otherwise, just give yourself some motivation to keep going when you have nothing else to do during the day.

The animation was great. Liked how Lubch (teacher) used his hands and seemingly only acts hateful because the students decide to aggravate. I suppose that is where he got his love of just tormenting the students for minor things such as not finishing homework or classwork within a given period.

The audio was quite enjoyable although I feel the voices could have been a bit better as they sounded a lot like robots. The background music helps set the atmosphere except the last five seconds when it shows the link for following you. What was that sound about?

Overall, good animation, looking forward to more.

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NewgroundSageNewgroundSage

Rated 3 / 5 stars

For someone who considers themselves "lazy" you actually have a much better grip and an eye for imagination which are a few important essentials into being an artisan and an animator. Yes most of the background is plain and bland but as you've mentioned you will detail them in due time. Audio for the electronic voices get a tiny bit clunky here and there but doesn't stop their progression of the character's personalities nor the flow of the story being presented here. You've done quite well no matter what others might think, you have great potential for an animator. I'm going to bestow you a 3/5 and a 3/5 in voting power. I hope you've enjoyed this review and stay focused on your goals that you've set. Keep contributing. Good day.


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limitless71limitless71

Rated 1.5 / 5 stars

Could use better voices and the ending could have been better instead of it continued on like a normal school day. If your here telling everything that there's a mean teacher...it shouldn't be a normal school day.


nat29 responds:

Sometimes the mean teacher is normal. Also I was lazy. Didn't you read? That's why an extended version is coming up. Also as long as there is subtitles, I don't think I need the voices to change. Your opinion.


MistyEntertainmentMistyEntertainment

Rated 5 / 5 stars

Actually very nicely done. Easily one of my favorite flashes from you.

It's a decent effort and I can appreciate the effort put into the storyboarding and storytelling. I'm going to assume the focus is on the storytelling rather than the artwork, but in case it was on the artwork:

-Some of the handwriting was sloppy
-A helpful tip: For the brush tool, click "Use Air Pressure" it makes it look pretty neat

You did a nice job of making Lubch look mean, though calling someone an idiot isn't necessarily what I'd consider mean but your decision.

There were some typos in subtitles (destory) that made it look a little odd.

I really liked the music.

Those were some very nice music choices, I should use Audio Portal music more often.

The William & Sly music (The Valley) was surprisingly fitting and went well with the scene, and the animation was pretty good.

REALLY NICE use of effects. The blurring, motion tween easing - I'm talking about 2:55 - very nicely done, couldn't do better myself.

3:41 - rolling the screen up - nice use of squash & stretch.

I am pleased to say this was pretty funny too ("Where to so i can come say hi?")

Really good stuff
5/5
10/10

Would Watch Again


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