Thank you all for your comments and reviews it helps a lot. Especially those who gave constructive ones as per what to fix or change. It is still a work in progress, so I will be sure to take everything into consideration for the final version.
Hi all, I've been working on this for a while and finally was able to put it all together. I am still working on the editing and color correction, and as well am planning to ad a little camera shake ad more depth of field throughout the whole video to give it a little more 'inside of a train' feel.
I would appreciate it if you can leave me a review and feedback! Also, sorry about the prel-loader it appears that I need a new version of flash since mine will not allow coding at the moment.