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Aug 30, 2012 | 10:36 AM EDT

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This is my first animation I have ever made. So I'm mostly looking for feed back and tips on how not to suck.
The goron was originally going to rape me and it was supposed to be really graphic but... i felt bad for cartoon me :P



Rated 5 / 5 stars

Hahahaha for ur first one its simple weird and funny... good job man!


Rated 5 / 5 stars

this was amazingly good for a first animation

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Rated 5 / 5 stars

Very good for your first :D


Rated 3 / 5 stars

For a first, quite good. I made a flash animation once, and you did quite a lot better than me.
The good: a bit random humor, lip synching, character design, realizing you should have a background, letting everyone know that you want to add it and then do without. ;-)
The Bad: I did not like the really fast transitions between his movements, The music did not really fit imo.
All in all I think you have potential, just keep at it!

Topgannon responds:

Yeah. The big problem i have is I'm lazy :P I was gonna make it go longer but... I'm lazy haha and yeah the quick movement bothers me too. I really need to work on that. but thanks for watching. :D


Rated 2.5 / 5 stars

quite alright if i do say so my self...