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My first flash. Also testing out some EFFECTS. CC is welcomed. I am willing to become a full-fleged animator and become one of the greats (LazyMuffin, Egoraptor, HarryPatridge, Oney, Sexual-Lobster)
Seriously? You look like your a veteran to flashes Thats how Awesome tht was
ahhhhhhhh it was short, i loved your style
This is awesome! So epic for a first flash!
This is incredible for your first flash! Your choreography was well made, and animation was overall smooth. Nice choice of music, too. You may want to do something different with your font if it's not going to be the standard "subtitle" format; having the black box behind your white text makes it look somewhat out of place. There are a lot of creative ways to apply written dialogue that isn't at the screen's base. I also noticed some scenes were missing backgrounds. The Deadpool-fanboy-scream, while humorous, was a strange place to end it.
You have a lot of potential, I'll watch for more of your content. 7 / 10
Great for you're first!! Make more now!!
ASTEROID HURLING TOWARDS EARTH!!!
tasty crunch of yummy cookie crumble
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