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Aug 27, 2012 | 6:14 PM EDT

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This is a little flash I made to be the intro to a series of flash shorts I'm working on. The series is called "George the Vampire" and it's about the misadventures of a recently divorced vampire named George and his friends John the ghost, Paul the zombie, and Ringo the werewolf. Also featured in this series are George's new love interest, Olivia the human, John's wife Yoko the witch, Paul's wife Linda the mummy, and Ringo's wife Maureen the sea monster. The characters are partly based upon the Beatles and their wives and even share the same names. I hope you find the intro interesting, I'm sorry the characters' facial expressions don't really change, I wanted to add more facial expressions in but my flash program was being screwy and wouldn't let me -.- ah well...

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CamoRalphCamoRalph

Rated 2 / 5 stars August 28, 2012

For an intro, this is waaay waaay too long.
I like the idea, but this intro was lacking in variety. Each character was drawn the same way, in the same pose, from the same angle. It would have been nice to see some variety in their design, or where they came from... maybe they each have their own title screen?

I would suggest researching other cartoon intros of the past and watching just how pacey and quick they make them. For quick little 7 minute eps the intros are only really several seconds... for half hour shows the intros tend to be 30 seconds, but you really dont need anything that long for something like this.

Sorry to sound harsh, I just reckon this needs work in order to really pull people in. Best of luck though dude, keep going!



FearedSoulFearedSoul

Rated 2.5 / 5 stars August 27, 2012

Was okay.. dont really know how i feel about it...



Fingus1Fingus1

Rated 1.5 / 5 stars August 27, 2012

I get the old school comedy style you were going for, but its too long and tedious to be the intro of a comedy, try a more dinamic and faster way to introduce the characters.


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xXAngelPooXx responds:

Thanks for the advice, I think I'll probably either remake the intro or just speed this one up :U I wanted to make it better then it was but my flash program was acting up today...


zerovexenzerovexen

Rated 0 / 5 stars August 27, 2012

really need to work on it it needs more facial expressions and need to make them move not just make the char slide but actually move


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xXAngelPooXx responds:

I know, I'm going to add more facial expressions in the actual flash, but my flash program was being screwy today so I couldn't do it in this... they won't slide in the actual flash, that was just in the intro, in the flash they'll walk