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Okay, this was actually pretty funny, however the quality is disappointing.
I do like the animation and the drawing style, it's not too bad. It's good enough to be funny, however, I have no idea with what program this was made.
It's very pixelated and in the bottom, you can see what's going to happen, which is kind of distracting.
It looks like it was recorded with a screen sharing software, if that makes sense. It also leaves me wondering if this was actually yours, or if you simply made a copy of someone's video.
If it is yours, keep this in mind next time, because it can give off the wrong idea. If you did this frame by frame in paint and than pasted it together, make sure you save everything with a high quality extension, so it doesn't look pixelated like this. It may take up more space, but it definitely improves your submission.
The voice acting was also okay. I thought the voices were pretty funny and the sound was very clear.
Also, auto loop gets me every time. Please try to add a loading screen next time. It doesn't have to be complicated. Or just a single screen at the end with a replay button so it doesn't loop indefinitely.
Overall, idea was funny, voice acting was funny, style was okay, but the quality kind of ruins it for me.
You did a pretty good job and I see potential in this, but please, work on the quality of your images so it doesn't look like it was recorded with a potato. It didn't sound like that, so it shouldn't look like that either.
Hi there, we are using Adobe Flash CS6, as for the little square on the bottom... I have no idea how that got there, this is our first video we've actually made we have them on Youtube and decided to expand a little to get our name out there. If theres any ideas you can offer to get rid of the pixelation that would be great it was fine until we turned it into a .swf file... Also we have NO idea how to add in a loop or put in a loading screen, that will come soon. Keep watching and thanks for the feedback :D
Hmm, very basic and not too animated. Still, a reasonaly good start with some decent humor. I enjoyed it well enough to give it a 3.5, I might also add the voice acting was really good.
LOL brilliant hahaha. Haedrigs terrible -.- also the weirdest char to make a toon on. GW!
Thanks for the help :D
wasint that good...
Constructive criticism is welcomed, just saying "wasn't good" really doesn't help us at all...
It's da pizzaboi.
I keep on having this reoccurring dream, where Tobey Maguire watches me eat cream.
Good things do happen.
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