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this might be continued if people like it. If people don't like it, and It gets a low rating, I won't continue it. I really hope people like it. I have the whole thing planned out. Part 2 will be posted Thursday August 30th.
I liked this.
It didn't make much sense, but that's what made it fun. It doesn't need to.
I would definitely like to see this continued.
I know a lot of time crawls into stop motions so I won't say it's too short, but I would have preferred it to be longer. I'm going to assume this was just a teaser to see if people were interested and if you do decide to continue, I'd like it if you made the parts a little bit longer before you upload it. People would rather wait a while for something that's longer, than have something really fast and that's over in less than a minute. At this length, people are also quicker to forget about it. Longer episodes will make the story easier to follow.
However, the voice acting bored me. It was very obvious you did it all on your own, which isn't a bad thing, but if you choose to do it all on your own, make sure you bring some differences in your voice. Change your pitch according to different characters. That might even make it more humorous and usually people think it's funny when people talk in weird voices. Don't be afraid to try it out. I think for this submission, it might work.
Overall, I liked it. It didn't impress me tough, because of the voice acting. I think if you do something different with the voice acting, this can have great potential.
Good luck with this and I do hope to see more of it in the future.
It was original and kinda funny, the props used were interesting, however it coulda used a little more trying with the voice acting. clearly it's the same guy, and it didn't seem any attempt was made to give them individual characteristics.
yes. exactly. I really need to work on that.
Welcome to the end of the world
Wouldn'tyou just like to... leave conflict.
What happened to Cortex's airship?
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