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HEY GUYS I'm back, and this was meant to be a quicky but I experimented on it so much that it started to become a little bit bigger than I intended to... just watch it o_o
it's not anything fancy, but I have bigger better projects coming up.
so watch it, AND REVIEW PLEASE I LOVVVE FEEDBACK :DDDD
EDIT: THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR REVIEWING EVERYONE :DDDDD
Hahaha i love the part when all explode and is on fire.
Good drawings and the voice-acting is acceptable; entertaining. Pew!
Thanks for reviewing! :DDD much appreciated.
Decent writing, decent voice acting, subdecent drawing, and animation needs a lot of work. Some jokes were funny, some weren't. The plane burning and people running around was dragged on for a while. The joke with the native chief rabbling on with some evil intent about his atmosphere turning into him asking about rap was really funny, I thought. You've got a lot of potential, but I think most importantly you need to storyboard with friends you can bounce ideas off of and work on those animation skills!
Alright, thanks for telling me, it's much appreciated :)
and thanks for reviewing too!
I'm sorry, I couldn't sit through all of this. The jokes are stale, the animation is honestly rather poor, and the voice acting is mediocre at best.
If I had to say something positive, this isn't offensive at least.
I hope your bigger projects turn out well.
Sorry you didn't like it :c
Thanks for reviewing anyways :)
A story about a dog!
this art teacher is WHACK!!!!
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