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Aug 23, 2012 | 11:07 AM EDT

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HEY GUYS I'm back, and this was meant to be a quicky but I experimented on it so much that it started to become a little bit bigger than I intended to... just watch it o_o

it's not anything fancy, but I have bigger better projects coming up.

so watch it, AND REVIEW PLEASE I LOVVVE FEEDBACK :DDDD

EDIT: THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR REVIEWING EVERYONE :DDDDD

Reviews


joeartguyjoeartguy

Rated 4 / 5 stars August 23, 2012

A little dodgy on the art and animation, but this story is so epic, I can't believe no one has written a really bad rap song about it. I totally think I sat next to that guy on a plane once. Good work!


someplaceelse responds:

XDDDDD

Well I'm glad you liked the story. Thanks for reviewing!


MrJuliananessMrJuliananess

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars August 23, 2012

So funny in so many ways! Sure, the animation and lipsync might not be the best, but it very much akes up for it in awesomeness and humor.


someplaceelse responds:

Glad you think so, thanks for reviewing :)


ushadow77ushadow77

Rated 4 / 5 stars August 23, 2012

Animation looks great, sound is great, story is great and is not crap like a bunch of other things i've seen. Nice work, I like this. Oh, and yes it is a bit long to be an experiment.


someplaceelse responds:

It was a short film turned experiment. :O
In other words it was actually going to be some random thing I did to break my hiatus, but I ended up experimenting on it :P

I'm glad you enjoyed it though! Thanks for reviewing :)


OddaneverythingOddaneverything

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars August 23, 2012

Decent writing, decent voice acting, subdecent drawing, and animation needs a lot of work. Some jokes were funny, some weren't. The plane burning and people running around was dragged on for a while. The joke with the native chief rabbling on with some evil intent about his atmosphere turning into him asking about rap was really funny, I thought. You've got a lot of potential, but I think most importantly you need to storyboard with friends you can bounce ideas off of and work on those animation skills!


someplaceelse responds:

Alright, thanks for telling me, it's much appreciated :)

and thanks for reviewing too!


cavifaxcavifax

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars August 23, 2012

Hahaha i love the part when all explode and is on fire.
Good drawings and the voice-acting is acceptable; entertaining. Pew!


someplaceelse responds:

Thanks for reviewing! :DDD much appreciated.