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HEY GUYS I'm back, and this was meant to be a quicky but I experimented on it so much that it started to become a little bit bigger than I intended to... just watch it o_o
it's not anything fancy, but I have bigger better projects coming up.
so watch it, AND REVIEW PLEASE I LOVVVE FEEDBACK :DDDD
EDIT: THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR REVIEWING EVERYONE :DDDDD
A little dodgy on the art and animation, but this story is so epic, I can't believe no one has written a really bad rap song about it. I totally think I sat next to that guy on a plane once. Good work!
Well I'm glad you liked the story. Thanks for reviewing!
So funny in so many ways! Sure, the animation and lipsync might not be the best, but it very much akes up for it in awesomeness and humor.
Glad you think so, thanks for reviewing :)
Animation looks great, sound is great, story is great and is not crap like a bunch of other things i've seen. Nice work, I like this. Oh, and yes it is a bit long to be an experiment.
It was a short film turned experiment. :O
In other words it was actually going to be some random thing I did to break my hiatus, but I ended up experimenting on it :P
I'm glad you enjoyed it though! Thanks for reviewing :)
Decent writing, decent voice acting, subdecent drawing, and animation needs a lot of work. Some jokes were funny, some weren't. The plane burning and people running around was dragged on for a while. The joke with the native chief rabbling on with some evil intent about his atmosphere turning into him asking about rap was really funny, I thought. You've got a lot of potential, but I think most importantly you need to storyboard with friends you can bounce ideas off of and work on those animation skills!
Alright, thanks for telling me, it's much appreciated :)
and thanks for reviewing too!
Hahaha i love the part when all explode and is on fire.
Good drawings and the voice-acting is acceptable; entertaining. Pew!
Thanks for reviewing! :DDD much appreciated.
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