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Second time using Flash. So this is all I could do. Enjoy the many farts!
I don't thinnk this would be anything good. I suggest adding some action and some ACTUAL comedy.
Not the best animation (or voice acting) I've witnessed but it was mildly amusing. HAVE ONE STAR.
You need to do some work man, the only redeeming quality in this flash is the music and thats not original content. I'm sure you did not ake this too seriously, but I'll still throw some constructive criticism your way. Read if you please. Your art and animation are the biggest areas you need to improve, to include perhaps a back ground, maybe some smooth movement, versus the 3 or 4 frames you have repeating. Good use of the tune though, it did make me giggle. I hope you don't take this as a reason to quit animating, and by this I don't mean the review but the almost certain demise of this flash. I hope you had fun, and continue to have a good time man. Oh, and a play button and stop at the end with a replay would be a good feature to research too. The loops, unless well done, are rarely something people appreciate.
WAs kinda funny... but the flash needed color...
Can't beat that game!!
It's Payday Fellas !
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