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Aug 20, 2012 | 10:24 PM EDT
  • Daily 2nd Place August 22, 2012

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Death explains cruelty to Elsie and recalls Barcas' final moments. Part 2 of a three-part series. Part 1 here: R8?hd=1



Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

Can't help but feel the story telling is alittle abrupt, compared to the first. Still very well done though.
Keep up the amazing work.

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Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

Good story sounds like a book


Rated 5 / 5 stars

was a very nice way telling a story and i cannot wait til lthe next one!

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Rated 3 / 5 stars

i like it!


Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

Excellent piece of story telling. Keep up the great work.