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Hey, this is our first animation, and we hope you all like it! Visedgrub and I plan on working together in the future since we had fun making it, so leave yo reviews and stuff and enjoy!
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I lol'd at this, it was really funny, and the voice-acting here's really awesome. I also liked all the little things that you see at the animation too; aside from any minor issues, it doesn't really take away from the really good stuff.
That was extremely funny, ESPECIALLY the end part. You're animation's not that bad, either. However there is one minor note: the sound quality. It's a little too loud at certain parts, but overall I liked it. Keep up the good work!! =D
Yes it is. We both are learning from this, and sound quality is now a major point that I make sure is okay when recording
Its a great concept, I think. The voice acting was good, but the sound quality was bad at times. Plus, the lip syncing was very off. Its pace was kinda slow in comparison to the amount of dialogue involved, too. Brush up on the animation pace and sound quality a bit and you've got yourself an animation.
Keep it up!
Great idea, but poor execution. The audio was WAY too loud at more than one point, you seriously need to level shit out. The voice acting needs a lot of work, and some of it was even out of sync. Otherwise the overall premise was pretty damn funny.
As the voice actor/sound engineer, I will admit that I did a bad job with this. The sound bytes were loud and defibitelyneeded more levelling. I also know that we're going to be making more animations and those will hopefully be really cool!
It's a decent short. has some great animation and some moderate humor. the main glairing problems that are present in the short stem from a few notable animation errors and the audio. The lip sync is kind of off as the mouth shape does not match with the word pronunciation and there are a few stray lines around the characters (not the eye lines, it's just an aesthetic) and sometimes animated objects disappear. the issue with the audio was that it wasn't clear enough at time and didn't have a good volume balance.
Never the less, the animation was very good overall. the characters had fluid movements that can be enjoyed over and over again. The jokes, while used many times before, are utilized in unique ways (like the ending joke where the man's attempt at proposing was all for not for a completely different reason.
Overall, decent job.
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