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Pokemad

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Pikachu's patience is tested by the other Pokemon and he reaches his boiling point!

This short cartoon was made over about a week or so, I'm still learning so any support and feedback is appreciated.

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i like your world ^^ nice animation :)

song please

eh it was something.

Lets what this video has in store for me...
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Like

Animation- Pokemon look like the Pokemon they are suppose to be... Thanks for not trolling the viewers...

Menu- Some people forget how vital these are, especially in preventing the animation from repeating itself....
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Disliked
- Animation of background... wow, was it bland... Not bad, but feels like you quickly through it together... Just keep working at it, and you will get better :D

- The whispering thing... yeah, your hearing this a lot...
{I feel like your a younger person or someone who's afraid to curse... if this is the case, find an area where you can record without being disturbed, and maybe practice swearing in front of a mirror. Watch the kings speech for some inspiration}

-Snorlax falling in... not the joke itself, but I felt you cheated by using a blank screen to zoom out...
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Nitpicking

-Joke wasn't funny , but humor isn't universal... people should realize this, but it will hurt the opinions of others...

3 and 2 (:3) get better :D

JabaToons responds:

Thanks for the review mate!

The reason it sounds like whispering (and this is to answer everyones question) is beacause I live in a house with my two young brothers. There's seven of us in the family and my setup space for working and recording is quite shit! I usually wait till I'm alone in the house to record but didn't for this cartoon, maybe I should have =/.
I have no problem cursing XD if you watch my other videos but I can't really shout swear words when my family will hear me. Will have to wait till their gone or I get my own place!

Anyway thanks for all the constructive criticism and your time, I appreciate it!
Jack.

I agree with the people below. It sounded like you were whispering or had a hoarse throat. And I didn't find it that funny.

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Aug 18, 2012
8:44 AM EDT