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Aug 17, 2012 | 12:28 AM EDT

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Write a review telling me how I can improve. The second flash I ever attempted to make. It's pretty bad, but whatever. Thanks!



Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

Masterbation reduces mucle growth ? wtf
before he started with his lefty how ever in end he had big right arm


Rated 3 / 5 stars

Not bad, needs to be longer.


Rated 2 / 5 stars

good humour i guess, very short and animation needs working on


Rated 2 / 5 stars

It wasn't bad for one of your first attempts at flash although there was a couple of things that I noticed, for example when you see the guy behinf the computer havin' a quick rub out he has the body of a stickman then later his body has grow and includes detail like a torso. This made it seem like they were different characters. Also there wasn't a lot of sound used and what was was unfitting.

Just keep practising and I'm sure you'll get better in no time at all.

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xMrJoeyx responds:

Thanks! I'll try to make my third attempt actually worth watching.


Rated 5 / 5 stars

Not bad for first animation.