Dangers of masturbation
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- rated 2.32 / 5 stars
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- Genre:
- Comedy - Original
- porn
- dumb
- arm
- masturbation
Author Comments
Write a review telling me how I can improve. The second flash I ever attempted to make. It's pretty bad, but whatever. Thanks!
Reviews
Rated 3.5 / 5 stars August 17, 2012
Masterbation reduces mucle growth ? wtf
before he started with his lefty how ever in end he had big right arm
Rated 3 / 5 stars August 17, 2012
Not bad, needs to be longer.
Rated 2 / 5 stars August 17, 2012
good humour i guess, very short and animation needs working on
Rated 2 / 5 stars August 17, 2012
It wasn't bad for one of your first attempts at flash although there was a couple of things that I noticed, for example when you see the guy behinf the computer havin' a quick rub out he has the body of a stickman then later his body has grow and includes detail like a torso. This made it seem like they were different characters. Also there wasn't a lot of sound used and what was was unfitting.
Just keep practising and I'm sure you'll get better in no time at all.
Thanks! I'll try to make my third attempt actually worth watching.
Rated 5 / 5 stars August 17, 2012
Not bad for first animation.