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This is my very first animation it took some time making and it includes some dbz sound effects. Its about sonic and shadow having an epic battle to the end and seeing the last hedgehog standing.
Hope u enjoy it. :)
dragonball sonic lol jk but it needs some work, its cool thogh dont get me wrong it gust takes time. you can do it
Thanks I'm glad u liked it and it's clear there needs to be some improvements
It's pretty good.
The character art could use a little work, maybe a little more polishing? I would recommend the brush tool instead of the pencil / line tool, though if you're drawing with a mouse and stuck with the pencil / line tool, I'll personally recommend lines of varying thickness. They add variety and make the artwork look less mechanical.
For the text, I'd suggest choosing bolder colors, for example, black text instead of green text and maybe inserting more frames? Sometimes the text went a little too fast for me, but who knows, maybe that's just me.
The Dragon Ball Z sound effects were well-placed. They really enhanced the fight scene and added to the overall piece.
Sometimes the characters seemed a bit too stiff (like when Sonic fell down), so I would suggest trying to make it look a little bit more natural.
The scene in the sky was a little repetitive, the movements didn't have enough variety. I'd suggest cutting down on the same movements and moving on to the next parts.
It's good overall. With a few improvements, it could be great. I wish you luck in your future animations.
thnaks for the advise its really hlpful and yh my next animation is coming together good
Very good :D
You know... This made me laugh so hard!!
I think it has something to do with the fact that it's so random and the quality isn't really that great.
I mean at some point I saw 3 lines fighting 3 lines LOL!
Or actually they were just 3 lines moving around the screen..? :P
The dialogue is random, fast, and pops all of a sudden. I have no idea what they were talking about XD
And btw, the music didn't really rhyme with the fight, but it's not a bad addition (better than nothing.)
3 stars from me. This made my day XD
thanks im glad i made ur day randomly
needs a lot of work...
ok but my next animation will be better
It's da pizzaboi.
I keep on having this reoccurring dream, where Tobey Maguire watches me eat cream.
Good things do happen.
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