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Well this is the product of a wasted week of summer. I think its probably the most well animated thing ive made so far which is kinda sad. anyway gimme some feedback.
GOD I HAD MY VOL ALL THE WAY UP! MY FRIGIN EARS
sorry. Im trying to get better at audio
All over the place, pointless and just plain dumb! I like it
Wasn't a good a idea to make all of the characters look the same. I had to rewatch a few times to get that Slenderman was licking into the protagonist's eyeball (even though in the next scene it isn't shown. lack of consistency!) and that the headphones out of nowhere was really the person playing the game.
and um don't use rage faces, it makes you look like a hack. create your own.
someoes a bit slow... JK! but thanks for the critisicm. I actually like negative feedback because usually it helps me improve. Thanks!
-_- ...its horrible. :P although, I couldn't do any better myself so i'm giving you three stars.
Its Ok I guess, I can see what you're trying to say.
A short film about a park bench
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