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My first cartoon! It's short. It's stupid. The audio is a bit off. But I sure am proud of it!
You can visit <a href="http://indubitablye ntertaining.thecomicserie s.com/ ">Indubitably Entertaining</a> for more jokes and silliness!
And my <a href="http://www.youtube.
com/user/ieJoMaFlo?featur e=guide">YouTube channel</a>
The animation was very nice, brilliant for a first cartoon. The audio lacking sync was an obvious mistake that should have been fixed, but it wasn't enough to ruin it.
The cartoon was charming, but I feel it lacked the humor impact it was trying to achieve. I smiled when he was swimming, but I didn't laugh.
The cartoon seems to suit well as a cutaway in a larger cartoon, but falls a bit flat as a standalone video. Definitely an author to watch though, I'm interested to see what is next.
Thanks so much! I had the audio running perfectly in flash but when I uploaded it here it got a little out of sync.
I like it. Sorry it's not a little longer, but otherwise a helluva lot funnier and better animated than the "this is my first cartoon"s that pass through the portal.
Well I'm glad you enjoyed it! And yea it's short but I made this as a practice animation for a bigger cartoon I'm workin on. It was kicking my but so I decided to do a few simpler projects to help me get the hang of things.
I hope your cartoon makes it. There's no irony to it, no forum inside jokes, or any of the other crap that makes me hate reviewing NG movies. Its short and sweet, cute and funny. A perfect first movie.
Thanks a lot! It was just a silly idea I thought would be funny animated
Simple little story. Dont know it its going to make it onto the portal, but I liked it.
guy drains his main vein.
The first episode of my original anime
Two Men Fight to the Death!
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