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Aug 6, 2012 | 10:08 PM EDT

Author Comments

My first cartoon! It's short. It's stupid. The audio is a bit off. But I sure am proud of it!

You can visit Indubitably Entertaining for more jokes and silliness!

And my YouTube channel

Reviews


IcyGammaIcyGamma

Rated 3 / 5 stars August 7, 2012

The animation was very nice, brilliant for a first cartoon. The audio lacking sync was an obvious mistake that should have been fixed, but it wasn't enough to ruin it.

The cartoon was charming, but I feel it lacked the humor impact it was trying to achieve. I smiled when he was swimming, but I didn't laugh.

The cartoon seems to suit well as a cutaway in a larger cartoon, but falls a bit flat as a standalone video. Definitely an author to watch though, I'm interested to see what is next.


ieJoMaFLo responds:

Thanks so much! I had the audio running perfectly in flash but when I uploaded it here it got a little out of sync.


missedtargetmissedtarget

Rated 4 / 5 stars August 7, 2012

I like it. Sorry it's not a little longer, but otherwise a helluva lot funnier and better animated than the "this is my first cartoon"s that pass through the portal.


ieJoMaFLo responds:

Well I'm glad you enjoyed it! And yea it's short but I made this as a practice animation for a bigger cartoon I'm workin on. It was kicking my but so I decided to do a few simpler projects to help me get the hang of things.


AceMavAceMav

Rated 4 / 5 stars August 7, 2012

I hope your cartoon makes it. There's no irony to it, no forum inside jokes, or any of the other crap that makes me hate reviewing NG movies. Its short and sweet, cute and funny. A perfect first movie.


ieJoMaFLo responds:

Thanks a lot! It was just a silly idea I thought would be funny animated


KhakihatKhakihat

Rated 3 / 5 stars August 7, 2012

Simple little story. Dont know it its going to make it onto the portal, but I liked it.



VoisVois

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars August 7, 2012

AWESOME