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Aug 6, 2012 | 1:50 PM EDT
  • Daily 5th Place August 8, 2012

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My first proper attempt at a full Flash animation.

Blue is off for a run in the forest, but when he collides with a young girl picking flowers, can he help set things right?

Reviews


skerry2006ajskerry2006aj

Rated 5 / 5 stars August 8, 2012

what the fu?... i mean... dude... it is awesome, i really loved the graphics, but... i cannot seem to get through my head the eye ideea... i mean the blue robot got an eye to make the girl happy... what should it mean?...

anyway, you get my 5/5 because it was awesomelly animated, and really cool done...



hiperpot001hiperpot001

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars August 8, 2012

to be honest, is pretty good, for just a moment i thought it would be a simple animation, but after i see it... i can't find the right words to say it.

i sense a shining future on you. But of course, that depends on the dedication you give
on your animations.

the ending was a little confusing with a little lack of common sense
[but we are talking about a robot(?) in the middle of the forest giving a
strange eye to a girl, so common sense is something i sould never say.

Anyway the charatchers were kinda simple, same as the sound effects
but the music and the background were...beautifull

To be honest, i enjoyed and i love your first animation.
Congratulations.


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StereoideStereoide

Rated 4 / 5 stars August 8, 2012

While the last minute or so doesn't quite meet my tastes (but this is of course purely subjective feeling) I very much liked the serene introduction with the firebug zipping around.
That scene reminded me of http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view /276841 and its successors.



Bloodraven432Bloodraven432

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars August 8, 2012

Hm, not bad for a start. Now I'm no animator but I can see a few things. Now, you gave a bit of mystery at the start. A robot running away, what was it running from? The girl, is she a robot as well since that eye came out? Maybe a bit of text, you don't have to use dialogue but if you're going to keep it short try to put a bit more emphasis on interaction, talking is a good way to emphasize it. You could splash in a bit more color, quite a bit of green and brown along with yellow. But still good for a start.



0pepsi0pepsi

Rated 2.5 / 5 stars August 7, 2012

The grafics are great but the movie is very short


Vallhemn responds:

I was planning on making it longer, but I couldn't decide how to end it.
I'll try to make the next one a bit longer :)