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Sorry for the glitch at the start where it says "you lose" I don't know why it happens
acually its pretty fun
C'mon dudes! This guy is 11-years old! For a game made from such a young guy it's good!
I'm gonna tell you this as a game developer:
First of all,the concept is very poor,very,very poor,but the basic idea of speeding up after collecting a square is fine. I say you just learn AS 3.0 and continue. Maybe you will succed?
And the music,I agree with UPTX,is probably taken from somewhare out from Newgrounds. Watch for that and if that claim is correct,please replace it with something free,or something inside Newgrounds. That is all.
Thanks for the advice :D
First of all, I believe the music track is copyrighted, but again, I'm not sure. If it is, I advice you to take it down, seeing as you could get sued if a corporate guy is in a poor mood.
Secondly, the graphics are jagged and pixelated, making it irritating to look at. The design isn't too swell either - everything seems randomly placed.
Thirdly, some sounds would be nice, like when you hit a yellow square. Like a PLING or something.
Forth, the idea frankly, isn't new. I don't see any original elements in the game and the original idea isn't even good to begin with
And lastly, very impressive for an 11-year old, AS3 can be a bitch sometimes, but sadly I have to vote fairly - I can't give you a better rating just because you aren't an adult. But hey, everyone has to start somewhere!
Thanks for the advice :D The music is from a youtube show called the annoying orange.
Nice and simple. Nothing more. It would be nice if there were a leader-board.
I dont know how to make leader boards
Ever wonder why there's no cool animals out there like unicorns and owlbears?
A rip-roaring dungeon running adventure!
Keep calm and shoot down mobsters.
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