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im putting this up to get some feedback and helpfull suggestions to get this to be my intro i know the heartbeat part is long if and when it becomes new intro :P will shorten a bit
It looks to me that this flash is going to be great, I can't wait to see it.
I like the style, very dark and well-drawn, the only thing that kept me from giving it a full 5 stars is that it's a bit uneventful for my tastes.
The answer is probably no but were you inspired by rtil's intro? For an example watch his black-and-white intro for "Move Your Feet."
I would've liked it more if the music didn't stop when the scythe was being swung. Maybe perhaps, continue it until the end of the intro? Or you could always go with another piece of music that synchronized with the animation better.
Also I noticed at the end it was pretty much a still frame (but with what I'm thinking is a movie clip), maybe shorten that part at the end?
Just some suggestions, you're on the right track.
Not bad. Kind of left me wanting more. Let me know when the finished project is done for sure.
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