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Aug 2, 2012 | 11:42 PM EDT
  • Daily 2nd Place August 4, 2012

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Thanks for the Daily 2nd and frontpage!!!

This flash was incredibly fun to work on over the last 25 days. I wish I had more time to flesh out the 2nd half but this is as good as it'll get. I found that getting more sleep helped tremendously compared to my other NATA submissions where I would pull all nighters. The kitchen scenes are all based on my experiences working the grill at McDonald's and the whole premise feeds off the anxiety of forgetting to put an ingredient on the sandwich during assembly. I wanted to add more of a back story to the cheeseburger but simply didn't have time. I hope you enjoy watching as much as I enjoyed drawing all of it. Thank you SymbolCymbal for the amazing music and your band Corridors for having some good ass tunes.



Rated 2 / 5 stars

I really have no idea what to make of this. Was it supposed to be funny? Atleast the animation was decent.

BillPremo responds:

I really have no idea what to make of this. Was it supposed to be funny? At least the spelling was decent.


Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

An...odd choice for storyline. The ending disappointed me slightly.
Storyline: 4
Art / design: 5
Music: 4.5
Also, could've been slightly longer

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Rated 3 / 5 stars

The music was good, and so was the action. but the premise was kinda weird


Rated 1 / 5 stars

that was mediocre

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Rated 0 / 5 stars

Terrible. The humor was so off, I was tempted to break my computer. This thing doesn't even deserve Tai Jin Senpai's signature.