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Little Goldilocks stumbles upon something BIG...
This was animated for a 24 hour video challenge, and the theme was 'Fairy tale'
cute video really clean but not really much animation
you walked a thin line between stylistic and lazy, and you crossed it a few times. The plot was... nonsensical. And, though I know you were trying to be funny, it was not successful. For example, a pee joke? Really? Not that pee isn't ever funny, but the punchline was "She's peeing!" Which isn't funny. Like Vader with a beer bottle. Also, not funny, because there's no... Joke, I guess.
My big piece of critique is to say: for the love of God, never use those voice actors again.
There are gaps in the story that don't make sense. It was hard to follow the progression.
Second-Year Animation Film (2015)
If you try eating the Mouse Cleaning Service, you gonna have a bad time...
devoted to the ambulative pleasure
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