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Jul 26, 2012 | 6:07 AM EDT

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An adaptation of a story that freaked me out as a child.

Reviews


nselliott1nselliott1

Rated 5 / 5 stars July 27, 2012

Fuck, my lights were off and i only read the beginning, the last paragraph made me see some pair of eyes staring at me on top of my computer, bogeyman much?



dominicansoldierdominicansoldier

Rated 5 / 5 stars July 27, 2012

i have to say this is one of the creepiest stories i read, hats off to you my friend. I would love some more content from you my good man!


frequentlyqa responds:

I only made this story to capture the fear it instilled in me and show my friends, but after everyone's comments I may just be motivated to produce something new :) thank you!


PwnyPetePwnyPete

Rated 5 / 5 stars July 26, 2012

Quite a riveting story. I was not expecting any of the jump scares! I think this should be on the front page!



RossUndeadRossUndead

Rated 5 / 5 stars July 26, 2012

good story =] i might use it sometimes if i get the chance...


frequentlyqa responds:

Yes definitely feel free to re-use the story, this one is after all already an adaptation. I tried to put my own slant on it to make it more relevant to an older audience and to also include themes that personally made it even more creepy for me (I got a little scared writing it at times). So be sure to alter it and make it YOUR ideal horror. Thank you and everyone for your support :)


Ninja-PandaNinja-Panda

Rated 4 / 5 stars July 26, 2012

Nice story i loved it! the funny part was at the beginning were it says yes or no. I tried clicking on No but it just disappeared.