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I'm hoping to make a series of short cartoons using this character where he gets hurt in everyone in some way if the feedback is positive enough
There is no rhyme or reason, I'm only in it to make YOU smile!
All sound effects taken from FL Studios
Why thank you good sir
This made me laugh, just wish there was more reason WHY they suddenly beat him. Having a character be victimised for comedic relief is fine but there has to be a reason why, otherwise it gets boring. Good luck!
Thanks for watching and the feedback! If I do keep on making something with this character I might give more reason for why, but I would like to hurt him more in new interesting ways that no one sees coming.
I have other characters and little story ideas for you guys with who want something with substance, but those are coming later. Right now I'm honing my skill, and trying to get a few laughs while I do it.
Not sure what i just watched, but i started laughing pretty hard near the end.
LOL.. oh i'm a horrible person :D
Then I did what I set out to do. Glad I could make you laugh
Needs more length and to be fleshed out.
Even for a short, it is lacking a lot in the story department. The slapstick needs a better punchline than "we beat you with baseball bats" (Aliens with bats?..).
The animation is fairly decent, but you do need to work on improving your skills.
Overall, not bad. But not noteworthy, either.
I see what you are getting at, but I was setting out to make something to get a few chuckles out of people, ya know? Not something with a story or anything like that. Like would aliens have bats? it's just an obscure thing I thought was kind of funny and wanted to share with the world. Know what I mean, brother?
Second-Year Animation Film (2015)
If you try eating the Mouse Cleaning Service, you gonna have a bad time...
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