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Dragon's Tear, chapter 1

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Comedy - Original
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Jul 25, 2012 | 1:52 AM EDT

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A very quickly done animation to supplement a reading of a short story my sister wrote when she was 13. As the chapters go on, there are only more and more wonderfully preteen cliches, so hold on tight and enjoy the thrilling adventure of servant girl (and secret princess/fairy) Maylab.

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Monsterlover666Monsterlover666

Rated 4 / 5 stars

with a title like Dragon's Tear, it is funny but i think you should take it more seriously and have a more deep plot wit strong feeling, descriptions and of course, DRAGONS. its not bad but certainly not good. i like it. all i ask is to take the story seriously, make the voices unique and maybe get some other people to help.



NekoyoujoNekoyoujo

Rated 3 / 5 stars

Better than my writing.



09CArventos09CArventos

Rated 2.5 / 5 stars

Amateur.



ok26201okok26201ok

Rated 3 / 5 stars

after the first few moments I thought I had enough... I could read better than understand the commentary... (hint put in text and make it go slower)



Magi24Magi24

Rated 4 / 5 stars

I do like this story. Got some chuckles outa me, very good going!