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Latest installment to the Jokes series. It is a short joke about what elevators talk about when people are not around and how they feel when we ride on them.
Meh. Not bad, but could be improved.
There are four big problems that I can see:
*The into needs serious improvement.
*I haven't seen the others, but this joke is pretty corny. Not always a problem, but you have to know how to make it funny.
*You should add more jokes to each submission, and make it go by a bit faster.
*The animation is sort of bad.
You will improve overtime. I don't make videos myself, so I can't teach you any new techniques.
You have an idea, but perhaps imporving your technique could make things better. For instance, maybe a shorter intro or smoother drawings.
A short film about a park bench
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