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It's a silly short, hope you enjoy it!
I've used the character designs from the game Facade cause I thought it'd be amusing.
Odd animation, rather dull and droll plot, and overall, just not very fun. It could definitely use a stir; or a random explosion. Something to at least make it funny and worthy of the comedy tag.
"or a random explosion" NEVER
thanks for the comment
what a silly short with characters from facade.
There are many different forms that i am seeing here for your video. let me explain it on a good and bad form:
Good: animation style. Of course, anyone who has seen your videos or your animation, which should be most of the newgrounds users by now, knows your style is good, but i just think that should be constantly pointed out whenever something is loaded beceause in many cases, the animator may change something in his animation, and i noticed that the animation seem more fluent in the movement. The other good was the concept that the story was being built to either make me laugh or make me actually have an emotional feeling based off of your style. You're not exactly a random situation person because most of your videos have made me laugh in the past, but you do at time have a twist in you usual video uploads at times, like your 'life in portal: madness" or "ssstick fight!". but this one looks like it was going one of two ways...which brings us to the bad
Bad: the plot. it was just too short. the way you had it going, it looked like it was either going to have something ridiculous happen to the man because the girl wanted to test him, or something romantic was going to happen, or maybe even both. But it didn't. and that was the biggest problem. it was cut so short. this is not the usual effort that i see you put in your stuff, and i theorize that you are tired. if not, then oh well. and let's not forget the kissing scene. it was a bit over done and kinda weird, but not stupid or gross. Just over done. like toast. all in all, I take a star for each of the two but do not dissmiss your animation. it was solid and good and well reciveable. But if im right and you are tired....go take a vacation or stop for a while and rest. the internet's not going anywhere.
Ha The kissing was so awkard, Good work xD
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