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A young lad finds him self in a pickle....
Short, shit and didn't make sense. At least the graphics were passable. Next time post something longer and logical.
Maybe if i could understand whats going on i would like it?
well...the sound isnt terrible, but it isnt good either. The art isn't great, work on shading, and maybe change up the scream soundwise, it sounds like a short one on a loop, make it a single, long one. The concept however, is good. Just work on the other stuff around it.
nope this animation has no sense at all but i give you 0.5 for the try and graphics
The movie goes way too fast to understand what's really happening in each portion of the movie; important parts need more coverage and clarity of what is happening so that, for example, people don't think the protagonist is trying to punch the sun (because that's not what's happening, right?). Also, for the brevity and nature of the animation, such would be better seen in one solid scene rather than multiple seemingly unrelated bits. Keep practicin', etc.
Thank you for the great feed back!
i will definitely take what you said into consideration for some of my others animations!
also i am going to redo and re upload Damn It , using the feed back you gave me.
in the meantime have you checked out my other videos , and my YouTube channel
"903willyboy" ? pls do!
Blue Pencilmate meets Red Pencilmate, but things don't go so well...
While taking the day off work, Lloyd and Glynis take in a movie
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