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Death finds a friend in one of his victims. Part 1 of a three-part series. Written and animated by Katy Towell. Narration by Tim Jones. See more stuff at http://skary.com!
Wow that was amazing... I would like to see the next part :)
the story seems a little bit similar to Haku and Zabuza in naruto.. if i can remember
She kinda reminds of Ida from the children are scary series
Nice, I really liked it. More!
The first thing I would like to say is that the artwork is sooooooooooooooo stylish! Loved it!! It was a pretty good part 1 and I'm looking forward to the next segment. However, there are some things I'd like to ... "nitpick". Death's first attempt at killing the girl: while I liked the music and the imagery, I felt it ended up a little flat. The pacing is too quick I think, with the narration going from "He lifted his great scythe and thought... thought... he just couldn't do it". I think the tension could have been built up a little more. Next, the narration for Elsie's death: it's really the words used at this moment, I don't think it matches the mood of the scene. And finally, Death taking Elsie away: again it's the "dialogue" that bothers me, I know he's taking to a child but the way he forms his sentences... can't get behind it. But in any case, I thought Death looked great, Elsie looked adorable and I'm looking forward to the rest of the story ! Keep it up !
Can't beat that game!!
It's Payday Fellas !
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