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I made this 3d animation in Blender.
I would recommend perfecting your art before posting any content online. As it stands, this is nothing short of shit.
It's ok to learn. But it's not ok to submit every little thing you produce. That's what people are trying to tell you in their reviews. They're not trying to rag on you, (well, most of them anyway), they're trying to get a point across. Don't get mad and wordy with your reviewers when you submit parts and bits and unfinished things and they point that out to you. Submit something good (and complete) and you'll get good reviews.
I agree totally! Better things are in the works now that are being worked on for days instead of hours! Bigger productions that are way more ambitious! I hope you all stay tuned until then. Peace!
Maybe extend the length of the fight scene and add some more frames? The animation is kind of jagged and the kill shot being the first blow is a makes it feel like a massacre rather than a fight.
You know what? I think you might be right. But I see fights on the internet all the time of guys trash talking another guy and then that other guy knock him the hell out in one hit and THATS considered a fight... But I dont know, if you think about it maybe its not. My biggest mistake here is rushing this thing out instead of working on it for a few days I only spent a few hours on it start to finish! So my bad everybody! I will try harder next time!
This should be called a slideshow. Seriously, for me it isnt an animation.
I give 1 star for 3D models.
Yes, atleast you tried. But I have to give you props cause I tried to use blender once, that didn't work, AT ALL. Of course i still have to rate you like any other normal person here in newgrounds. and since you probably all ready know that it's a pretty hard program to understand at the beginning that it's probably hard to get the animations to come out smooth. (I'm not entirely sure, I tried to give colors to objects and it didn't work out how i wanted it to do, so I gave up using that.) But something that you can control that I know you can do is better acting :P.
Zero out of Five.
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