uhhhhhhh rip off of dbz and stuff... no
Start Date: January 1st 2012
Completed: June 24th 2012 (my birthday)
Well, this is it ladies and gentlemen. This is the super secret project I have been working on. Codenamed Project Knightmare, This entire animation was pretty much freestyled. What was supposed to be a fight sequence with the characters you see in the beginning, somehow turned into a short movie combined with ideas that had been going through my head in high school, and ideas that I came up with for this project. No script was written for this. All I did was mess around and record random lines off of a microphone that I had bought in late 2011. Whatever came to mind, I just went with it. No storyboards were drawn until the final scene. The story is also very cheesy, but if you think the story is cheesy, your ears will bleed at the voice acting! it was all done by me and lemme tell you, IT'S TERRIBLE! What else, oh yeah some of the drawings that I had done were somehow deleted. I don't know how this happened, but I'm just glad this project is over. Will there be a second episode to this? I honestly don't know. I'll just go around and ask some VA's if they will be up for helping me out on this, mainly Droux the Shredder and Vero-Chan, but considering how they both recorded for Blue Vs. Green 3, and it's still not out, I higly doubt there gonna assist me with this one. Even with all the flaws this animation has, I just wan't people to look at it and tell me what they think of it.
Well I hope ya'll enjoy this cartoon. The flaws are painfully obvious, but I took 5 months off of the internet to put everything I had into this. Music and sfx belong to respective owners, I own none of it. Comments and feedback are welcome.
uhhhhhhh rip off of dbz and stuff... no
and this review does not help me otu at all....but thanx for watchin.
I'm sorry but there was no way I was going to subject myself to 11 minutes of this. For the type of animation this is I would definitely recommend making the flash anywhere from half to a third of the current size, it was too nonsensical and cohesiveness was vague. I mean 11 minutes of pure random "freestyle" flash about some guy fighting over muffins? That kind of stuff only lasts so long before amusement turns to annoyance.
there is a good chance you didn't watch the entire movie, but thanks for commenting anyway.
I've been surfing this site since 96 or 97. I think that this flash could've been first or second place daily winner 5 or 6 years ago and thats saying alot because it means that you're moving in the right direction. The animation is smooth, the voice acting is great and the story is nonsensical.
I honestly think that the voice aciting is limited because my voice is limited, but thnx for telling me what you thought of it.
File size is WAY too large.
The animation is average, and the sound quality is not that good.
There is no reason why this movie cannot fit into the standard 10 megabyte envelope.
So please optimize your future episodes.
The story was interesting, and I'm looking forward to seeing more.
Thanx for telling me what you thought. Oh and in response of the file size being too big. Look at Chakra X's Eclipse Force animation, that was 171 mb and that was only 7 minutes I think. Maybe because he used after effects or something I dunno.
= I guess the moral here is don't join dangerous cults, Practice safe sects.
You see? i was right! JUNK food is the true source in unlocking my powers of awesomeness, and if anything blueberry,(Which is my favourite amongst chocolate chip) Must have the minimum of 50 blueberries in them, those are the things in life that makes me a happy bunny.
Guess the only problematic thing is when you have a black guy, named after the 1994 -1996 power rangers, makes you wonder where his suite is...Oh wait he must be the"Ghetto Ranger"...Meh close enough, The production value of Power Rangers was always shady and back-alley related..
So anyway, aside from the story being "What the hell...?" the first scene is with a guy sparing on THE LAND OF COOKIES...................I'm going to say that again....THE LAND OF COOKIES.......
What...did he warp into Super Mario world Cookie land?
Anyway there's this guy with what i can only be described as having weirdest dress sense known for villains....yeah you know a villains a Villain, when they are some getting defeated while wearing Tutu's, give them a C+ for having Bravery, takes alot of guts to loose that level of dignity........no seriously they have issues.
And there's the guy with the "Jin Kazama hooded outfit" ....I guess he took lessons from Tekken fashion? This known Vigor of a persons super power is, yep you've guessed it! BlueBerry Muffins.
This also gives him the ability to act like the Dwane Johnson for a moment while flying..
And last and not least, the old Guy in the Dojo... lol...do i really need to go there?...
Not to mention the "old mentor" has been always given the role of dying by rejected evil student,
Or the mentor is murdered by another clan, or just dies!.....The blah blah blah the Good guy has to avenge the old master......But really? Goukens theme?....not very original at all..
The Verdict:
The months of how long this took you had paid off, this wasn't too bad but wow for only 11 minutes this was an incredibly large file, you may need to fix that problem.
The presentation wasn't too bad but nothing special either, the sound was alright with a few noticeable sound effects, this obviously is someone that is into his beat'em up games, which is pretty evident.
The voice acting is limited, and just sounds like the same person, mainly because it is the same person...
The Direction is Action Comedy, with bad guys in Tutu's getting beat up by guys who eat Blueberry muffins for breakfast.
Youi rated this four stars!? Wow...I didn't expect ity to get that. You caught me off guard with that *ahem* "Ghetto Ranger"comment but eh it's cool. The important thing here is, you looked at it and told me what you thought of it and for that I thank you. In the description (that is if you read the description) it says that a large majority of this animation was FREESTYLED. That means I didn't write a script to it. I just messed around with a microphone and recorded whatever came to mind. I'ts obvious that I need to improve, and trust me when I tell you I am going to do my best to. Thanx again for watching. Oh and the large file thing, read the response I told to the guy above.