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I've always wanted to do something like this and I think I've done a pretty good job. please give me constructive criticism to let me know what I could improve on in the future.
that actually was not bad at all. wasn't funny but i don't feel like that anything was meant to be funny. I liked the storyline and would like to know how it ends. I also liked that they talked to eachother in a manner that seemed possible with the characters. Very good
If you haven't already known, this is based off the video game scene on Sonic & knuckles. So if you've already played the game, you should already know how it ends, lol. if you haven't then maybe I'll think about making the next part.
this is very good i liked i you did a good job but whed tails shout his name adzactly
It was more of an excited shout when a kid meets someone new.
I believe you putting it as drama wasn't the right catagory but much more of action. I do like the animating you did and the background was well done. Something that could make the sprite better is the speech boxes, they are pretty bland. Making them look better would definitely make a difference. You did a good job with the whole thing and I did like how Tails yells his name since nobody seemed to care for it. I do hope that you make more animations and that my review will only help you too.
Three out of Five
I changed it to action, thanks for the helping words. :)
Not bad, honestly. Text boxes could be a little nicer though.
i thought it was good. i dont know what you mean by camera problems but heres what i thought you could do different: when sonic was bouncing off all the walls then hit knuckles i thought it would look better to zoom out so you could see the whole screenshot and zoom back in to knuckles as sonic comes flying back at him. The text bubbles could of been more stylized to look like the animation or part or the series (the sonic franchise), and lastly is when they fall through the floor, show what happen to the floor. did it crumble underneath them or did robotnik do something. again these are opinions to nelp not hurt or impead your creativity, good luck in the future.
About the crumbling of the floor. I really didn't know how to do that, that's why it just cut to them falling.
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