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With Before and After Shots....
Don't want to diss on my own project, but I'm quite unhappy with the quality of the colours on this video. The video which is on youtube is of better qualities. Some, exporting problems. Only got myself to blame.
Oh my god the ending was soooooooo shocking.
I love this! <3
Thankyou :D I am very pleased to hear you enjoyed it.
it was pretty good i guess ...i fell that he could grow as a flash creator
seeems to be alot of wrong things with your tagging... One is action, not a whole lot of action going on here. Two is the rating for the video, I found it much more for the mature audience. The animation was bad and so was the background, but the audio was respectively decent. The joke to the whole video was kind of bland also so that wasn't really helpful to your score from me. One thing that you could do is put in a little more work in on the little things in animating, (example: tears.) The tears (at least thats what i think that what it was when he was petting his cat) where just oval balls on his cheeks. Maybe other than that, try making them streams that actually connect to his eyes that go down to his cheeks. Also I did see you tried different lighting on somethings like the mans suit, that normally would be a good thing to try doing, but in your case it backfired and didn't look quite as good as it was suppose to come out. His arms kinda went back and fourth from being infront of his chest to being behind his back. You should just try solid coloring until you can figure out how to make that work out for you. You made the joke stretch out farther than it needed to be also. it was kind of funny when it said after 200 spam messages, just thought why the hell not, but after that it got really bland and boring. Maybe shouldn't of made it as a comercial. So, pretty much, work on your animations and the comedy and you would defintly get higher ratings. Hope my review helps if you make more.
One out of Five
A short film about a park bench
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