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Jul 9, 2012 | 12:55 AM EDT

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This interactive animation was made for the multimedia project This Book's All Lies. The story here is an example of daydreams I would often have about the girl I liked when i was 12-14. [This is a resubmission because I mistakenly placed it in the games category]

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missedtargetmissedtarget

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars July 9, 2012

I really liked what you were going for here, but I thought the monologue was a little trite. Lots of nice little touches here. I would have liked to see more relevant stuff happening in the squares. Also, sound quality was not great.



OhMyCaptainOhMyCaptain

Rated 2.5 / 5 stars July 9, 2012

It's a very sweet story, but the interactive part of this flash was a little confusing. The vocals need to be a little cleaner/louder. Music, not so much. Needs to be a toned down a little. other than that, nice work.


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gps1195gps1195

Rated 5 / 5 stars July 9, 2012

im in tears. great job. it softens my heart what youve done here. it reminds me a little bit of my past experiances. i cant say enough what this means to me. its so descriptive. are you an author perhaps. i think its the ending that was the best/worst. a damn good flash


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ArchonicArchonic

Rated 4 / 5 stars July 9, 2012

If the first one you submitted was in the wrong category, you ask Wade to delete it. It also might be a good idea to say in the description that this was resubmitted, because I thought this was stolen for a couple minutes. Anyway, I'll give this the same score I did for the other one.


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pzimmerman responds:

Thanks for the tip! Just messaged Wade.