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Made two fan characters, But only needed one so I have to kill one.....here goes.
Story: ninja Inu (that's the Naruto fanchar) receives a letter telling him to come alone to the forest. Against his better judgement he goes....
Sith Inu is ordered to go to the forest and kill whom ever he see's.And no matter who he see to not be surprised.the council has given this order.....It must be obeyed.
It actual is some really good Sprite work. It starts out slow but the fight really picked up and was fluent, I felt it was a bit unnecessarily sad at the end, for what it was, it made you want the guy who lost to win, which slightly decreases the enjoyment of first tiem viewing, though may increase second time viewing. Not sure if that was your intention. Then again, I'm just soft hearted, so it might not matter. With sprite work all you can really comment on is fluidity and storyline. So, I've scored you, and it is a higher than usual score for my sprite reviews. Hope you make more in depth work, and learn how to draw an audience in a bit faster in the future.
The hunter becomes the hunted
A chicken goes to work.
Cool and Great
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