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Better controls, maybe be a bit more creative with the cooking? And get rid of the dark screen, its highly annoying. But the characters are amazing and I love the storyline, although I can never find my way anywhere, maybe highlight where it is you need to go maybe? I actually got really nervous with the Demian thing, and the thrown knife was a good part. I got surprised alot and really like the plot (dont wanna spoil it for anyone so I will omit the parts I liked, but it was really great). The harp necklace was great.2

-sigh- You continue to disappoint me with this game. Well, let me start off with the good.

I like that it felt we had more choices, not much more but better than before with choices that actually seemed to effect the outcome. I liked the scene in the classroom, I thought it was very cute and sweet, and the characters at the cafe are developing nicely.

Onto the bad. I'm very upset that you still have not changed any of the gameplay itself. The arrows to move around are very annoying and unnecessary. If you want to keep them that badly then you can at least label them like, To the Classroom, Outside, To the Cafe, etc.

The interactive game was nearly the same, I did like that you changed the directions on the bowl stirring to make a little more sense. But when it came time to decorate that desert (cake?), you weren't really decorating but instead trying to get those itty bitty little pink balls on there as fast as you can. They were such a small target I missed a lot.

The only thing I didn't like about the character's personality's was Valen's reaction to being called Tino and Valentino. I mean, i understand some people don't like certain variations of their name, I certainly don't, but no one freaks out like that about it.

Oh and this is just an opinion of mine but shouldn't the trip to Virginia have been a choice? Maybe I really wanted to go there. Just a thought. I'm starting to wonder how many alternative endings you have for this game. With so little choices it doesn't seem like their's multiple choice endings.

One last thing that I didn't mention in the 2nd games review is the opening movie. I understand it for the first game, but it's so long that is it really necessary to continue putting it up in the following games? At least you were kind enough to put a skip option.

Again, I'm glad you made some changes but am still disappointed that you didn't fix the more annoying ones (like the black out screens, I keep forgetting I have to click again to get through them.) Good job, hopefully the next one will have improved.

Really guys? Really? The comments about the cooking almost put me off from the game but I'm glad it didn't. The cooking part is easy as hell. I really don't understand how anyone would struggle with that portion of the game.

Alright, part 3, now let's compair and review. 3 is..abit off. The 1st and 2nd one was must better, but then again it could be the first impression thing. Though the 3rd one has some good moments, and funny moments. The head chef is awesome.

Now, artwork. it is really good. Nice details, however, I think two of the characters looks abit too must samilier. Plus their personalty different doesn't sound as must as it should. I am horriable at names, but I think it was the cheerful red hair waiter and the silent one seems samilier design. However could be just me. Good art-work though and characters for the rest of the part are unique and good design.

Music, now, the music is good, but didn't make as good as impact as did as the 1st and 2nd, though likely heard it enough to not to be good surprise. though since nothing really bad going on, been pretty cheerful though out. So could be just that moment in the story. Though I wonder about the sound effects though. I mean, you make an choose, and boom, makes you think ya just when to die. maybe make another sound effect, and have that one noise appeared up when you found or seen something you shouldn't have. though not an expert on music, but these are my thoughts

Mini-game, yay cooking. well, as a revive said on not knowing what's going on, maybe you should maybe place a paper with the object you should place in order. Though it makes it abit easier, though it is better then randomly guessing. Now, stirring, now it is very hard, even though you know what you need to do. Maybe you should have the hit areas for it to get effect to spin it abit wider. And now the decorate. having to place them on quickly. if you not fast it could be abit hard. though it ain't too bad. on that part maybe you should have the options to really do decorate it. Like given a good amount of time limit, having the limits you should place on it, and some extra things to add unqiue creative design to make it fun, and also to have the skip or ect when you have everything needed you can go right to finishing the minigames.

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Now, the storyline. it is kinda like mid-point, nothing really big going to happen going on. Though makes you wonder what's really going on with the whole name thing on best friend. Makes you wonder what happened, and why it brothers him. Plus at the end, he seems so okay being called full name. Makes you really wonder. Also I expected the teacher to be an vampire, lolz at least that's a surprise. Though the teacher amuses me, that he pretty must has no idea what's going on half of the time, and troubling classmates. Though other then that, he ain't really must importion, though might not been though that far in the story. Now..when you can help everyone around. it was likely the most awark thing ever. you would expect it from the blond, but everyone else, it was kinda like that. Though also it make senses the reaction of the owner now, and the manger after seeing her. Since of the secret later on. Though it likely just slowly down abit on this part then good the next, so it's alright. Though it leaves me slightly disappointed however. We'll see the next one is better!

Alright in all, the artwork and music is find. The minigames is abit annoying, though beatable. The storyline is very slow on this one. Makes you wish more is going on. Though could be just a slow moment in the story, so I can't wait for the next one, and relive it ain't that long wait period. I ended up finding these novels yesterday just before this game relase today. woot..also, the password thing to coutain on and save you have orginally to the next. It is a simple and effective to coutain on with what you have, however, when it gets later on it be annoying like part 12, if you lost the password you gotta start all over again. Are you planning when you get alot of parts out or all, you going to put all them together? so not having to deal with the passwords?

i have never played the others games so i dont know if they told you what to do in the others because i had no idea ware to go or what to do then it asked me for a password for chapeter 2 and i dont know if it told me it in the dialog because i read like half of it and with all due respect it draged on for a long time and i dident see a password but the opining movie thing was vary well done but i could not do anything without the password and i was not going to shift through all that writing for a word but the game seems liked i must be the only one that dosent get it and for that im sory but if i cant play it i cant give it a good review