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Story By: Ilona Britvin
Animation: Adir Priewer
please commend! :)
The animation felt like kind of a downgrade, the movements and everything were a bit choppier than they should've been, a few more inbetweens wouldn't hurt. As I mentioned in my last review for the first episode, it suffered from an abrupt ending.
I dunno, it's the kinda thing where I won't be surprised if you called it a 'test' since it felt pretty incomplete. "Robot Love" being used as a play button isn't necessarily a good idea, I didn't realize it was a play button until later on.
And finally, it looked like you just moved stuff around. Not saying it's bad, but when done in a choppy way like how you decided to do it, it looks kinda cheap, especially when the entire production relies on the line tool.
Hope this helps.
Jerry Jackson has made some Flash and would like to share it.
The ultimate stick figure series, and a bunch of goofy parodies as well!
The Little Freakin' Knight!
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