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Idk. This is... idk... just watch.
I thought the flash was pretty good, but a few flaws kept it from being something more. First off the entire animation was extremely sporadic. There are times when the animation is really fluid and good, and other times when it looks like an amalgamation of MS Paint and Pivot Stick Animation. The best example of this is the all too brief interaction between the red and yellow stick figures. Each move looked like each one flowed into the next making everything fast, but also look cool. On the other hand we have another interaction between the blue and the black stick figures where there's this weird thing that the black stick's head would do where it rocks back and forth like a bobble head revved up on red bull. Couple that with the fact that the figure itself looked different stylistically from the others to the point where I think this animation may have been done by several different artists, yet for some reason only one person is credited as the author. Although like I said before, as a whole the entire thing is well done, and when it get's going it really get's going. I see some real potential with the red and yellow fight. For another animation, I would make that animation style the real focal point. As for this, for a demo this is pretty good.
Thanks! I'll work on that. This is just a demo counting that I am doing various demos of things like "fighting" and "backgrounding" to add more "realism" to the animation. So you can actually see the yellow stick man's actions.
It's a really good start, it didn't really need to be a loop though. You have some serious potential and I really enjoyed the animation effects. (Almost more so than the actual animation.) Keep in mind that not all of us are speed readers, so some dialogue scenes need to be slowed down. Speech bubbles would also be appreciated. As well as some actual context to the entire flash. But amazing work overall, but 1.5 stars for an unfinished piece and only a demo.
Yea I'll work on making things more readable. And I don't really know how to make a menu thingy so I can get rid of the loop thingy. I'm new to this stuff. Thanks!
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