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I made this animation to test out some new flash techniques and I liked the original version so enjoy.
Animation by hummerh14
Original Video by Kirbopher
Original BGM by Yoko Shimomura
Rawest Forest by Marta
Lets see. The goomba and the koopa are the only things you bothered to take time on and detail. after that the art is mediocre, the mouths are the worst part to look at. Was that a 2 frame run scene? Ultimately everyone who watches this is gonna flame even though you do give recognition in the credits because you don't even bother to explain why you are making this flash. All it says is a work in progress. You can put a tribute to the original or something simple like animation test. Whatever the reason the blocky characters are a no no in my opinion. Good luck on whatever you are doing.
actually if you would of read the review down their it tells why im doing this flash also i dont see why people who cant even do flash judge. doesnt really make a bit of sense.
let's see. First off, you tried to remake someone's else work and you did a bad job at that. The characters look worse than in the original version an the voices sound pretty weird and that it's not very impressive. One more thing. If you want to remake someone's video at least make it complete. Really, this flash wasn't even half of the original animation. My verdict it's 2.5 satrs. Have a nice day, sir.
all im trying to do is test out some new flash techniques im not trying to do better than the original and just so happened i really liked this animation so i thought it was a good piece to get some practice . cant you guys comprehend that.
First off, don't remake someone else's animation, especially if you can't achieve the same level of quality.
Second, don't post this publically if it's unfinished. That's just begging for bad reviews.
It's could be awesome when finished, but, in the way it is, it doesn't deserve much more than 2 stars
It's not a bad little film here, but I feel like you began to crap out in the end which is really unfortunate. The animation seemed great at the start, but as it continued on I felt like you started lose interest in the project. Another thing that could use improvement is the voices of the characters in the beginning. They seem really low compared to the background soundtrack. Overall the animation started out very strong, but deteriorated over its course. 3/5
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