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This is my second animation. I hope you all enjoy it! ^^
i think its good it would be better if it was longer
this is pretty good. I am really dissapointed that it turned out to be that short and all, which was already stated, but even more so that there is no conclusion, that it loops over and over.
as for animation, the red glow things are wierd cause they don't follow suite. the blink on and never back on for a while, rather than moving. so it doesn't look like ash or anything. Also, it's impossible for someone to move two legs together in perfect sync without having them tied. So Sasuke's feet should be off key to each other a smidge.
And finally, if it was an intro, or whatever you would like to call it, please title it as so. It would be less dissapointing.
But I hate leaving bad or negative reviews, so in hopes that this helps, I will end saying that so far you have a good start, that your music never alters from it's timing (which is rare for loops like this) and your artwork is pretty awesome for your second animation. Keep up the good work
This was incorrectly tagged with "fighting", "battle", and "versus". It would be more accurate to tag it with "staredown", "take a few steps toward each other", and "unfinished ten second animation with no actual combat whatsoever". Your art was pretty good, even if it was traced. The scene went well with the music. But honestly not much happened, they kinda just stood there for a while. I understand you're new to animation so I don't want to give you a hard time, but next time you should probably hold out and make the flash a little longer before submitting it.
Nice Drawning, But Really Short.
This is way to short. It's got potential though so don't give up on making these videos. This should have been an epic battle that lasted at least a few minutes.
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