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This is my second animation. I hope you all enjoy it! ^^
ah comeone what the hell!
i may love to do naruto animations too. like short and detailfull. but atleast i allways trys to make the flash as long as possible before finish it. this here is just dissapointing. not the flash quality. no i think this was great.very well detailed and well drawn. but its soo short and annoying
i mean from the first look you see this very good entrace wich makes us hired up and get excited only just to end. this is just dissapointing.
i hope next time before you do a 3 seconds flash atleast have the decensy to write (preview) or (trailer) on the tittle so we know nothing that its going to be short.
i hope i know what i mean here.
that was it less than 30 sec how the hell did it get first place
this is pretty good. I am really dissapointed that it turned out to be that short and all, which was already stated, but even more so that there is no conclusion, that it loops over and over.
as for animation, the red glow things are wierd cause they don't follow suite. the blink on and never back on for a while, rather than moving. so it doesn't look like ash or anything. Also, it's impossible for someone to move two legs together in perfect sync without having them tied. So Sasuke's feet should be off key to each other a smidge.
And finally, if it was an intro, or whatever you would like to call it, please title it as so. It would be less dissapointing.
But I hate leaving bad or negative reviews, so in hopes that this helps, I will end saying that so far you have a good start, that your music never alters from it's timing (which is rare for loops like this) and your artwork is pretty awesome for your second animation. Keep up the good work
For what it it, I would say- good job. :) 3/10
As far as remaining on the site, though, I've got to say that it's lacking. :\ 0/5
Newgrounds is for finished items. But people have been submitting tests, demos, parts, bits, and such for so long that it's started to get thru, and now people don't know what to do. This is a good example. It's kinda good, so should it get blammed? It's not a story, a finished animation, a completed project; it's a mostly finished loop. Should it stay on here with the finished items? This is good, but it's totally lacking in what it needs to stay.
If it passes, this will forever be an unfinshed bit floating around here, since you won't ever finish it. You'll upload the finished item as a new file, and we'll have both here.
And that's one of the biggest problems Newgrounds has now. Unfinished bits and what to do with them. :\
Good luck, bud. :)
I was so excited to see this when it started. It was a pretty awesome looking fan animation of the show but then it just...stopped. It would have been nice if you extended it and show a fight and not a stare off. Still 3 stars for some pretty good fan animation. Hopefully you'll extend it
A story about a dog!
this art teacher is WHACK!!!!
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