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Jun 27, 2012 | 8:52 PM EDT

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This is the begininng to Chapter 581 of the Naruto Manga

I don't really like naruto nor watch it but someone suggested I try this just to practice aesthetics

I didnt really make this to do animation practice

I did this mainly to practice drawing/shading/and backgrnd coloring not really animation as I didnt want to get too much into it



Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

Good job! I really liked the animation and soundtrack


Rated 2.5 / 5 stars

Not bad, but you should try working on your background some more, towards the beginning his tail moved so much it was difficult to focus on what I'm supposed to be watching.

Your shading could use a bit more work, try adding a bit of dimension with it instead of just adding lines.

The colors weren't too bad, but could all be improved again by adding a bit of shading in places so they aren't as constant throughout the entire area that's colored.


Rated 5 / 5 stars

I think I could have done it better. But the animation was awesome!

Kel-chan responds:

thx alot- I'm almost done editing the script for worlds apart 2- i'll send it when i'm done


Rated 4 / 5 stars

Art was really good. You used alot of camera angles and techniques found in alot of anime so that was good. You will get alot of people complaining there is little to no animation. Hope we can see more content with more animation next time.



Rated 4 / 5 stars

Hey there, good job. Dammit, i ignored the spoiler warning. Some advice, Shade a tad darker in the centre of your characters, and a teensy tad brighter around the edges of your characters, especially in darker scenes, as it helps to make your characters stand out. And the volume in this video was far too soft.