Support NATA 2014

Credits & Info

Uploaded
Jun 27, 2012 | 5:16 PM EDT
  • Daily 5th Place June 28, 2012

Related Stuff

If you liked this, check these out!


Author Comments

When the world is struck with spirits of the forgotten, one man can stop them, Scare. A lonely husk of an exterminator goes city to city helping those with a shade problem, but what he doesn't know is that he is needed for something far greater than the lesser shades.

Reviews


sharkr2d2sharkr2d2

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars June 27, 2012

Pretty cool idea. With some slightly better animations and a waaaay better soundtrack, this could be real cool. im already intrigued, and hope this goes through so i can look forward to the next one


People find this review helpful!

XxCxX666XxCxX666

Rated 4 / 5 stars June 27, 2012

Pretty decent, actually, work on the coloration of your character, and create an animation for when he kills the shades, also, this music is crud. But you got a 4 because of the story's potential.


People find this review helpful!
LefyBoy responds:

I appreciate your review,


dragonflamesmediadragonflamesmedia

Rated 4 / 5 stars June 28, 2012

your animation is a little lacking in the sence that it runs slow (story vs, timing, not animation speed) and you don't have much to go by. this is a good start though, I can see a lot of potential in your story. In my opinion, use long pauses (like done with the naming of the sword) to build up suspence before or after a fight. Use really fast motions durring the fight and slightly faster motions durring the peaceful times. I walk down a street faster than Scare does, which makes it drawn out rather than captivating. Also, keep consistancy.. if he has a hand without an arm, still use his hand to grasp the sword. How the blade appeared when you named the sword, his fingertips would be showing and the bottom of his palm too, showing that he has a hand.

But this could all just be me. It's a compelling story all in all and I hope you keep it up.


People find this review helpful!
LefyBoy responds:

I appreciate your review and I will definitely take your points, good ones mind you, into consideration when creating the next episode.


MiniDroidKreatorMiniDroidKreator

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars June 27, 2012

A pretty good plot for a decent animation.


LefyBoy responds:

I appreciate your review.


RickjawRickjaw

Rated 3 / 5 stars June 29, 2012

Plot was kinda decent I guess... The animation is pretty amateur ( I don't know I don't really animate) and voice was less of enthusiastic...
Patience is the key to success..so take your time in creating your ideal animation cos I got the feeling that you just wanted to submit to submit this ya know?
I'm going to give you a 3 for effort!!! And cos I know you'll improve over time.