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Jun 27, 2012 | 4:50 PM EDT
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Due to my poor writing skills, any spelling or grammatical corrections/critiques are welcome.
This is a "Character Story", which is a prequel and character side stories that will not be shown in my series/story "The Other Side".

This is the Monster's "Character Story", who is inspired by Naruto.

Music: Nier OST by Keiichi Okabe
Check out the rest of the characters: http://youtu.be/8OUZoGdh5 Nc

Reviews


MiniDroidKreatorMiniDroidKreator

Rated 5 / 5 stars June 27, 2012

Quite an interesting and gripping plot. Nice artwork too.


exninja123 responds:

thanks! :D


TheTopGoldTerrorTheTopGoldTerror

Rated 5 / 5 stars June 27, 2012

Can't wait for the series!


exninja123 responds:

hehe, thanks! :D


ThePlasticJesusThePlasticJesus

Rated 1.5 / 5 stars June 27, 2012

The story culminated into the unintelligable and didn't explain anything very well. Also, your flash submission appears to be nothing more than a slide show. Your grammar needs improvement, but the art work was decent.


exninja123 responds:

yeah totally agree with you on that
thanks for the review! :)


AtomKAtomK

Rated 5 / 5 stars June 27, 2012

Amazing! Good story, and the japanese style is great! =D


exninja123 responds:

Hehe, thanks! xD


harrypotter1388harrypotter1388

Rated 4 / 5 stars June 27, 2012

Great plot and art work, and use of music to set the tone.... I'm a fast reader so I was able to keep up but I would either reduce the amount of words per frame or extend the time for reading... as others may not be that quick.


exninja123 responds:

Thank you! :)