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Some guy is interrupted in reading...seems not a good idea ;)
Thats my first flash and submission to newgrounds :) It was made in one hour.
The animation was great; it was smooth and accurate. It's very short, though, and there is no audio, which while may not be necessary to convey the message of the short, I think it could've improved to have at least the sound of the crashing vase, maybe the gunshot.
I enjoyed the falling "B" at the end too. This is good stuff, overall, and I think you should definitely continue to work on your Flash talent, because it could turn into something amazing.
Thank you for your feedback, in the moment I'm working on my next clip, it will have better graphics than just stickman style ;)
A short film about a park bench
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