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5 hours to animate.
A short story about a guy and toast.
cute idea, though some further fleshing out would be nice. also, sound wouldnt hurt
I thought this was really cute and pleasant to watch, sound or no sound. It had a solid beginning, middle and end, and the animation was decently smooth for the style and experience that you seem to show. You did an alright job, so be proud of yourself for what you made.
I think for your first attempt it was good. The story is a bit odd. The mood is a bit bland. If you put in some music I think it would enhance mood really well. I like the little bits of humor in sad part by the way.
The animation was a little rough, but you DID manage to get a laugh out of me with the picture of the toast in the car crash on the news. Not many videos get me to even crack a smile, so well done on your part. Haha. I understand this is your first animation, but I have a feeling if you can improve the animation, while keeping the funniness, you could turn out something really special. Keep at it!
As you said this is your first time. Not bad. Keep working.
HBO starts targeting children!
What place? Earth!
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