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Pencilmation asks the age old question, "does size really matter?"
If anyone watched the last pencil animation rancor when he was in the boat you can see the little guy from this pencil animation xD!
The little guy is cute, hes always like \IuI/ and the girl like -_-
And I am delighted to get started on another review of this flash movie, the work does show you putting the time and especially some effort to it, This is kind of interesting so it doesnt bore you but does actually keep you wondering what may come up next so thats some things i notoced right away about this flash. So i didnt know there was this many of this series, i will for sure have to checkout the rest, i did find this style funny and entertaining, i love the pencil idea and the animation seemed to flow nice with this one, it was smooth and cool to see, i believe the only downside to this was that there was no color and by adding some spots of color here and there would make it a well rounded flash animation so just something to think about. I really enjoyed this flash and all that you have presented here, there was alot to see and it was overall fun so great job all around below i have left a few ideas that may help to improve on this flash, so keep up the good work and i look forward to more. from you and more of this type and style you did here, more effort never hurt either.
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So I actually found this to be an entertaining flash sumbmission, I did see a couple of things that could have been re-worked with a tad more effort, so i gone ahead to try and find some lacking points and do hope you consider looking into them as it will just add more quality, but anyways heres an idea or two. I did suggest the possible idea that having some spots of color here and there would be a nice touch, doesnt have to be everything just here and there, a spot a backround a line etc, but some color on this would be a plus.
Soooo getting a girl stung by bees works?
The pencilmations would make a good show on cartoon network.
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